tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post170252546482131745..comments2023-10-19T20:13:37.713+05:30Comments on Utopia: WHAT IS BEHIND THAT MASK?Utopiahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10704721941622143439noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-91835474805160470012007-11-08T02:06:00.000+05:302007-11-08T02:06:00.000+05:30God felt like someone jus peeped into my life!!! L...God felt like someone jus peeped into my life!!! LOL!! Esp the hazel eyes...anjanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03111353495231784653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-3601560141866024632007-11-04T21:08:00.000+05:302007-11-04T21:08:00.000+05:30oh yeah, im workin in blore... nice meeting u budd...oh yeah, im workin in blore... nice meeting u buddy... keep reading n keep writing... Peace Out!Kabirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13413016504372063407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-47608840464919869962007-11-03T18:59:00.000+05:302007-11-03T18:59:00.000+05:30So finally did the shackles break? were the hazel ...So finally did the shackles break? <BR/>were the hazel eyes that of neil?<BR/>What happened of Mira? <BR/><BR/>or was this the stry of 'the mask' .. hehe :D. But its been nicely fabricated, all around its surroundings ;) ..<BR/><BR/>cheersradioheadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13395315639501502469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-52459024045899599692007-11-03T18:28:00.000+05:302007-11-03T18:28:00.000+05:30how do u write like this? fell in love with the st...how do u write like this? fell in love with the story... beautifully written n da feelings r so true to life... cheers babe! tczShyamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01163756651380873533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-52791165510418588532007-11-03T16:20:00.000+05:302007-11-03T16:20:00.000+05:30A wonderful portrayel of feelings and masks... lif...A wonderful portrayel of feelings and masks... life is one hell of a masquerade party. :)<BR/>You write brilliant. *thumbs up*Awais Aftabhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04718828055532728613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-68065749519081124622007-11-03T03:02:00.000+05:302007-11-03T03:02:00.000+05:30Lovely one.. quite touching.. :)Keep rolling :DLovely one.. quite touching.. :)<BR/><BR/>Keep rolling :Dkyamaloomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08323885272939282430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-72676672686995378332007-11-02T22:18:00.000+05:302007-11-02T22:18:00.000+05:30most of people who know me have met me in a masque...most of people who know me have met me in a masquerade party.. not a real party but in real life..<BR/><BR/>but then I do like your ending, and I still believe as sameera says, who would make us rip the masks out.Ramblerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04048279856792308653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-11288071947671397412007-11-02T09:52:00.000+05:302007-11-02T09:52:00.000+05:30okay, okay. the story struck a weary chord.okay, okay. the story struck a weary chord.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-13743300410112455182007-11-02T09:51:00.000+05:302007-11-02T09:51:00.000+05:30This comment has been removed by the author.Shashi Iyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02060911912015802382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-59344482694302784492007-11-02T09:50:00.000+05:302007-11-02T09:50:00.000+05:30hai utopia,can you never write laik this.i love yo...hai utopia,<BR/><BR/>can you never write laik this.<BR/><BR/>i love your mira (and this sameera),<BR/>because i love jaljira.<BR/>i wonder how you write,<BR/>so light and oh, so bright.<BR/><BR/>louw,<BR/>:P<BR/><BR/>p.s: that first line wasn't a question. it's like 'miss, can i go toilet?' instead of 'miss, may i use the toilet?'. you know, 'can' for 'may'.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-74452268012761491092007-11-02T01:17:00.000+05:302007-11-02T01:17:00.000+05:30Wonderful story!There is always one person who has...Wonderful story!<BR/><BR/>There is always one person who has the capacity to pull off our mask even if the whole world falls for the facade.Sameera Ansarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05249126041067834608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-62314185458588603722007-11-01T19:54:00.000+05:302007-11-01T19:54:00.000+05:30I loved reading this... simply amazing!!! Made me ...I loved reading this... simply amazing!!! Made me wonder for a moment what was on in your head.Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12968098471968377487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-16695969088568509212007-11-01T07:14:00.000+05:302007-11-01T07:14:00.000+05:30Very nicely expressed..Masks hardly conceal the re...Very nicely expressed..Masks hardly conceal the reality and then why do most of us wear it.<BR/>As in the concluding remark you rightly said<BR/>//She smiled as she ripped the mask of her face .The mask was gone, lost somewhere in the darkness of the night.//<BR/>the word night perhaps is best substituted by..the way we lead our lives..just great utopia..keep it up<BR/>TC<BR/>CUCompassion Unlimittedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14502484998131301949noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-63734163458300340402007-10-31T18:06:00.000+05:302007-10-31T18:06:00.000+05:30:O what did i miss? Sometimes I have a hard time t...:O what did i miss? Sometimes I have a hard time trying to untangle the fact from the fiction :) but so well written, left me wanting more.Mundanely (a)musedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10316228190268108471noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-16441388179249171372007-10-31T01:45:00.000+05:302007-10-31T01:45:00.000+05:30wow.. a beautiful story... quite heart-touching :)...wow.. a beautiful story... <BR/>quite heart-touching :)WritingsForLifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15222395399977749183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-19324689.post-80884826712179958572007-10-30T14:27:00.000+05:302007-10-30T14:27:00.000+05:30The way you've intertwined the facade we all wear...The way you've intertwined the facade we all wear every waking moment with the masks at your masquerade party, is fascinating. I love the way you write Utopia.<BR/><BR/>Its a pity that the masks doesn't conceal all and our eyes betray us, but sometimes its only fair to let someone know how you feel. I live with my heart on my sleeve and lots of stories of heartache, but there is no other way to be.Shehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07681746917831453444noreply@blogger.com